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It's mundane,
the soda aisle
and my wandering, walking up
then down. I frown to distract.
Look intense.
And buy the soda you love
because you might, you
might be here to have it. Though
with I need a drink.
I don't need a drink.

The same strength, faux-weak
ness that I will always have,
and tell myself I learned from you.
I buy it, afraid I won't like the taste,
or maybe I will and it'll be there
for a few days squishing along inside me.
It's just fucking soda, but it also means
I still love you.
:iconaltruisticlies:
I write more than once a year, but it is all bad. It was RC Cola.
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but it also means by ~altruisticlies is a walk flooded with memories of love past, and those feelings that still linger. ( Suggested by `imperfect and Featured by `coshdaddy )
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Goddamn it, YES.
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~taintedbliss Mar 19, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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:iconrebekkah13:
Favorited.
I don't know what else to say.
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:iconitzakookie:
Simple is good. I like how you used few words, yet I can picture it so clearly in my mind. You are a truly talented writer.
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:iconchuquita:
Very nice work. :3
I luv RC soda but I rarely get a chance to have any.
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:iconxclockwork:
Ohh. The last line is beautiful. It completely changes the mood of the entire piece.
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:iconbeautifuloblivionxx:
i love this. seriously.
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~hellhoundp2k Mar 12, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Ugh, I love it.
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:iconxxxfallenxangelxxx:
Gorgeous, hon. The whole of is 'cut' perfectly and the emotion in it is great. Oddly enough I think along the same lines of this everytime I pick up a can of pepsi. Good memories always follow pepsi's :3 Well, anywho, dahling, awesome work :D
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